What with subscription walls I'm failing to find any details on this, but The Cool Equations by Deborah Wessell is said to be written in response to The Cold Equations.
James Patrick Kelly's Think Like A Dinosaur has been described as a response to The Cold Equations. I didn't find the review I read convincing on this point.
"I caught this teenage girl stowaway in the routine pre-flight check I always run before I hit the launch button on my space rocket, because I am not a lazy idiot and my supervisors aren't either."
John Wyndham's short story Survival (1958) - warning SPOILERS, also, I may be remembering the plot slightly wrong since it's a very long time since I last read it: A spaceship whose passengers include a pregnant woman is stuck in orbit around Mars after the engines explode. Tensions soon escalate into violence since there is not nearly enough food or air to keep them alive for the time needed for a rescue mission to arrive, and the woman is theoretically the most expendable person aboard. Becoming aware of it, she uses her feminine wiles to take control of the situation and systematically eliminate the problem (by playing the men aboard against each other) to save herself and the newly-born baby. Her first words, brandishing a kitchen knife as the first rescuers board, are "Look, baby, food..."
So the dude that reviews The Cold Solution seems to whine that "solution" stories all miss the point of the original story, which he feels is a "trolley problem" story, and the whole point is the terrible dilemma. Unfortunately for him, the story "The Cold Equations" is not a thought experiment, it is an attempt to tell a story. Thought experiments are allowed to be stupid and make no sense--they are intended to challenge you to think. Stories that are stupid and make no sense just annoy readers, they don't challenge them--except maybe to write fanfiction fixing the stupid. "The Cold Equations" has too many plotholes and idiotic circumstances to sit well with readers who know anything about the real world.
Indeed. I hear he made Godwin change the ending to the bad one, because, I don't know, he wanted to posture about hard men making hard decisions or something. I much prefer Julius Caesar's attitude in Gallic Wars, or Captain Bligh's after the mutiny: Both of them had a reputation for ruthlessness, and yet none of their people were expendable, they tried to get them ALL home/win the war with a minimum of casualties.
Wow—I just read this one for the first time. I was following along and nodding at the usual arguments against the Cold Equations scenario, but I was not expecting the ultimate villain to turn out to be…
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Government safety regulations getting in the way of private enterprise!
It honestly starts pretty fun - I like how they just keep pulling people in, even if none of the arguments are original - but then it really goes off the rails.
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Date: 2025-04-18 03:14 am (UTC)Sorta:
"We got outflanked by the Independent squad, and we're never gonna make it back to our platoon. We need to resort to cannibalism."
"That was fast. Don't we have rations or anything?"
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Date: 2025-04-18 12:27 pm (UTC)"Think Like a Dinosaur"
Date: 2025-04-18 01:00 pm (UTC)Re: "Think Like a Dinosaur"
Date: 2025-04-18 01:52 pm (UTC)How so?
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Date: 2025-04-21 02:36 pm (UTC)It would be an ultra-short story.
Date: 2025-04-18 07:34 pm (UTC)Re: It would be an ultra-short story.
Date: 2025-04-18 07:51 pm (UTC)"Hey Fred, the scales in your landing gear says your ship is about fifty kilos over. Better hold off launch until we figure it out."
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Date: 2025-04-18 11:11 pm (UTC)I have wondered whether The Cold Equations was an influence on Geta (Courtship Rite).
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Date: 2025-04-19 02:00 am (UTC)Getans would never throw perfectly good meat out an airlock.
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Date: 2025-04-19 02:02 am (UTC)Would that TCE had been a story, rather than an exercise in petty sadism on Campbell's part.
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Date: 2025-04-19 11:59 pm (UTC)https://web.archive.org/web/20190529124350/http://www.rhjunior.com/quentyn-quinn-space-ranger-0119/
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Date: 2025-04-20 07:11 am (UTC)But here’s a partial list of Cold Equations responses that I put together in 2021; it includes both nonfiction (including your critique from 2019) and fiction.