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james_davis_nicoll ([personal profile] james_davis_nicoll) wrote2016-03-01 10:07 pm
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[personal profile] desert_dragon 2016-03-02 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
It is most excellent.

[identity profile] colliemommie.livejournal.com 2016-03-02 03:13 am (UTC)(link)

It's very clear you are the protagonist, and we will slowly zoom in through the establishing shot to your p.o.v.

[identity profile] neowolf2.livejournal.com 2016-03-02 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
"Losing My Religion" is playing in my mind right now.

[identity profile] ritaxis.livejournal.com 2016-03-02 04:22 am (UTC)(link)
But I would like it better just slightly cropped so you take up more real estate in it.

[identity profile] w. dow rieder (from livejournal.com) 2016-03-02 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
"The wizard looked around. He was doing quite a good job of blending in to this unfamiliar new technological society, he thought."

[identity profile] anzhalyumitethe.livejournal.com 2016-03-02 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
That's SOOOOOO a book cover waiting to happen.

Like others have said, the girl in blue is important and the pic needs to be cropped.

[identity profile] dionysus1999.livejournal.com 2016-03-02 07:34 pm (UTC)(link)
"James wondered just when the characters from Avatar had begun populating the local watering hole. Damned if he was going to let them ruin his town."
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