http://Nathan Helfinstine/ ([identity profile] nathan helfinstine) wrote in [personal profile] james_davis_nicoll 2014-06-04 01:28 am (UTC)

It looks to me like his hand's a little too high. He's grabbing the jumpsuit collar/lapel.

OTOH, the lady doesn't seem to have any visible wounds. She is apparently suffering an attack of the vapors during said running fire fight.

That woman on the right, though. She apparently is extra vulnerable on her right forearm, right thigh, and waist, which is why she has the strangest collection of armor bits ever. Even if we grant that her weapon has no recoil, she is in a dynamically unstable position and is in the process of falling over backwards. She's going to fall into Mr. Handsy, and all three people are going to end up in an embarrassing pile on the floor.

Finally, the guy in the back with the Hapsburg chin who hasn't bothered to draw? He's also unstable, unless that right elbow is resting on the window ledge. The step he's on suggests that the window is background, but I'm feeling confused by the spatial relations.

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