ext_13458 ([identity profile] roseembolism.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] james_davis_nicoll 2008-12-29 06:41 pm (UTC)

No, it's more important to ask "Why bother spending a huge amount of space on something so utterly boring?" This is like doing a mystery novel, and starting it out with a full chapter about the conception and birth of the protagonist.

It was a useless info dump, that needed to be whacked down to two pages at most, and a sign that the author while a credible computer scientist really needed some training in how to write a book.


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